or, one more version...
From the swirling Cosmos with the rushing of the wind...
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From the swirling heavens (with "s" has different meaning than heaven, singular) with the rushing of the wind...
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From the bursting Cosmos with the rushing of the wind...
or ??? E :) -----Original Message----- From: Karenbueno <karenbueno@aol.com> To: elliestock <elliestock@aol.com>; oe <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net>; jpc2025 <jpc2025@outlook.com>; karen.snyder10 <karen.snyder10@gmail.com> Sent: Sun, Jun 4, 2017 2:49 pm Subject: Re: [Oe List ...] Pentecost Blessings That even makes it rhyme! PENECOST HYMN Tune: There's New World Coming Like the sound of heaven with the rushing of the wind Came the fire a-burning and new life was given to all The young see visions and the old dream dreams Born of fire, filled with power, for Earth’s call. To the light from darkness, and to freedom from fear Building from the ashes into one community Peter, Paul, and Luther, Augustine and Benedict Born of fire, filled with power, for Earth’s call. With despair abounding and a lack of hope around Still the Spirit comes to the ones who birth the day Giving breath and being to the ones who give their death Born of fire, filled with power, for Earth’s call. For the coming ages and the journey of mankind We claim the promise that the fire give life to them Deciding freely to live on behalf of all Bornof fire, filled with power, for Earth’s call. Verse 4, Line 1 needs a change: "...journey of us all"; "...journey of all life"; "...journey of The All" Karen Bueno -----Original Message----- From: Ellie Stock via OE <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> To: jpc2025 <jpc2025@outlook.com>; oe <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net>; karen.snyder10 <karen.snyder10@gmail.com> Sent: Sun, Jun 4, 2017 8:15 am Subject: Re: [Oe List ...] Pentecost Blessings or..."for Earth's Call'? -----Original Message----- From: John C via OE <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> To: Karen Snyder <karen.snyder10@gmail.com>; Order Ecumenical Community <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> Sent: Sun, Jun 4, 2017 8:19 am Subject: Re: [Oe List ...] Pentecost Blessings What about “for the Earth”? From: OE <oe-bounces@lists.wedgeblade.net> on behalf of Karen Snyder via OE <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> Reply-To: Karen Snyder <karen.snyder10@gmail.com>, Order Ecumenical Community <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> Date: Sunday, June 4, 2017 at 9:18 AM To: "KarenBueno@aol.com" <karenbueno@aol.com>, Order Ecumenical Community <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> Subject: Re: [Oe List ...] Pentecost Blessings Thank you Lynda, Randy and Karen. The power of corporate writing shines again! Karen Snyder On Jun 4, 2017, at 8:09 AM, Karenbueno via OE <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> wrote: Revised for gender equity, and acknowledging other parts of creation: PENECOST HYMN Tune: There's New World Coming Like the sound of heaven with the rushing of the wind Came the fire a-burning and new life was given to all The young see visions and the old dream dreams Born of fire, filled with power, for the world. To the light from darkness, and to freedom from fear Building from the ashes into one community Peter, Paul, and Luther, Augustine and Benedict Born of fire, filled with power, for the world. With despair abounding and a lack of hope around Still the Spirit comes to the ones who birth the day Giving breath and being to the ones who give their death Born of fire, filled with power, for the world. For the coming ages and the journey of mankind We claim the promise that the fire give life to them Deciding freely to live on behalf of all Born of fire, filled with power, for the world. (Karen Bueno) -----Original Message----- From: Lynda C via OE <oe@lists.wedgeblade.net> To: OE List <OE@lists.wedgeblade.net> Sent: Sun, Jun 4, 2017 5:05 am Subject: [Oe List ...] Pentecost Blessings This song was a powerful one for me, even with its old style gender. I never did find a replaceable word that fit the meter and the meaning. Wish I could hear some of our great voices and our not so great voices singing this on this Pentecost Sunday. I recall how the harmony filled the room with its power. Sing out wherever you are! Lynda Cock PENECOST HYMN Tune: There's New World Coming Like the sound of heaven with the rushing of the wind Came the fire a-burning and new life was given to men. The young see visions and the old dream dreams Born of fire, filled with power, for all men. To the light from darkness, and to freedom from fear Building from the ashes into one community Peter, Paul, and Luther, Augustine and Benedict Born of fire, filled with power, for all men. With despair abounding and a lack of hope around Still the Spirit comes to the ones who birth the day Giving breath and being to the ones who give their death Born of fire, filled with power, for all men. For the coming ages and the journey of mankind We claim the promise that the fire give life to them Deciding freely to live on behalf of all Born of fire, filled with power, for all men. _______________________________________________ OE mailing list OE@lists.wedgeblade.net http://lists.wedgeblade.net/listinfo.cgi/oe-wedgeblade.net _______________________________________________ OE mailing list OE@lists.wedgeblade.net http://lists.wedgeblade.net/listinfo.cgi/oe-wedgeblade.net _______________________________________________ OE mailing list OE@lists.wedgeblade.net http://lists.wedgeblade.net/listinfo.cgi/oe-wedgeblade.net _______________________________________________ OE mailing list OE@lists.wedgeblade.net http://lists.wedgeblade.net/listinfo.cgi/oe-wedgeblade.net